It took me a while but...
I actually had another review written out, then watched it again and realized I'd missed the point (was gonna criticize for opposing nature n machine, cos its old, and I don't much like old ideas. last shot of nature n machines together kinda killed that one tho) so this is a new review.
well done mate, its well drawn and well animated, the cityscape in the opening zoom is brilliant, although for 4 months work I would expect it to be slightly longer. that aside this is definately something to be proud of.