that was crazy
i love weird stuff like this
Reviews for "Duality Complete"
Intriguing
Apart from the obvious technical issues, I find it very abstract and intriguing. What I probably think you wanted your audience to think ishow Ying and Yang must co-exist in order for life to happen. The association with Man and Nature is perhaps one of the ways in which the eternal struggle of Ying and Yang can be depicted.
What I like most about this animation short is that its entirely out of pencil and paper. Though you used some masking techniques (probably) in the eyes of "Yang" when he sees "Ying" in order to save time; to make an animation using a physical medium can be very difficult ( due to the lack of layers and the possibility of smudging graphite )
The only thing you failed to see here is your audience. Pardon me but a typical user here usually expect something "flashy and bold," and not all of us understands anything deeper than a LOLCAT picture. Your best bet ( if you decide to continue with this style of animation ) is deviantart ( not advertising anything here ) if you want some advise or actual constructive criticism.
PS: Learn some basic Actionscripting, Newgrounds has its own pre-coded preloader which is very easy to use. And streaming videos does not work well in flash players without any UI ( it hangs/stops but does not continue further )
Hope to see you again!
Weenog responds:
thanks for the review, it's been both informative and amusing :p
Deviant art is okay but no way i would have gotten this amount of exposure or feedback on there.
So not everyone understands it...I find there's alot that do or atleast interpreted it in their own way and i'm very pleased to have shared this with all of you. ^^
take care.
O_o
whatever you took, share please O_o
Weenog responds:
Vine of the Dead
i dont understand why nobody likes this.
i thought it was preety good just short. its kinda like how my mind works...... so yeah.
sorry
im sorry but i dont like this at all :(