Lacking. Alot.
You basically put together one good message and a sloppy animation. I get the message, but the problem is that the animation is pretty much half assed. I really don't want to sound like a dick, I see that you tried, but this doesn't deserve front page IMO. If you put a little more effort in it, maybe. But not how it is now.
GAARARRRH
CHANGE THE BACKGROUND PICTURE RIGHT NOW its annoying and u can almost not see the drawings
Um, ok.
It was decent. But it didn't take me deep enough emotionally to really be sad.
Okay
This is not really so much as it seems, the point of view and the idea was touching but the animation and the art itself was not.
I'd expect more of this was to be on the frontpage.
Good part: The idea, the story
Animation/Music: Too simple, needs more effort and work.
There you go!
The idea was there...
But people just because the IDEA was good doesn't mean its frontpage material... the frontpage is meant for the best animations at a current time, and I'm sorry but the story was not enough to make up for the simple animation.
If the animation was picked up, or if the story was a a lot more detailed and clearer I'd give you something better... but I'm going to be realistic... it's not frontpage material.... and it isn't all that touching.
Before any of you review me saying that I'm insensitive to soldiers I am a WW2 fanatic and I am touched by many stories... I just don't vote ten because I like a little tiny bit of something... learn to vote properly people... please....