Cute and clever
Nice story presented in a nice way.
Cute and clever
Nice story presented in a nice way.
Awwww
How cute is that? :*
it so nice
cute it made me smile and think
not bad
you just need to improve your drawings that's all... but it's also good the way it is
I like it
Would I be wrong to assume you've watched SilverStitch's Colour series? The animation style, the use of music, the message and the overall simplicity of the piece screams some form of inspiration from those games.
As simple as the animation is, you still do a wonderful job of getting the point across. I'm not going to lie and say that it brought a tear to my eye, but it was definitely a heartwarming piece.
As for improvements... try smoothing up the animation just a bit, make absolute sure that the music fits the message (it worked fine here, but for future reference, the music can make or break a piece like this), and possibly make it a little larger.
The way the wall shakes is interesting, and the motion itself works, but I feel that the extent of the shaking may have been just a little bit much.
Otherwise, this is a great starting point. I'd love to see more like this in the future.
4/5, 8/10
-Jack