Great
Really energic, you're good!
Real instruments too, all right! Love, hate, anger, happiness. You variate it nicely without making it sound stupid. This is one of the best musical pieces I've listened to here on NG.
It starts, goes and ends just like it should!
Didn't have the complete feeling in it, something in the melody section could be changed. I don't know what, but something that will give goosebumps to the audience. Or maybe you don't need to change it at all, it was really good anyway.
Overall: Well done!
//Kheni