Awesome
Like the originality, and you took the time out to really not use any kiddie jokes, or anything obscene to make it work. Great job
Reviews for "Shallow Lake"
hey!
Pretty good,but you stole my name!!!!!! (karo)
Bye ._.
Fantastic
I need to gather my thoughts and catch my breath. Pheww... What great sense of humor, I truly enjoyed this. The dialouge was very creastive, without relying on crude humor to make it funny.
Karo- "Didn't like her personality?"
Abo- "Shut up."
Karo- "(chuckles) I guess no one's gonna be drowning in lake Abob either, actually I might go fishing there, catch me some hypocrite."
Best piece of dialouge of my morning, thank you for making my day! XD
7:58AM 6/26/10
nice
very funny, turning the tables on him.
Nice
I like it, it does playcate most of society. But I got lucky myself I have a bombshell of a woman and I'm only average looking. So it goes to show there's hope out there. :) And no I'm not filty rich.