Good story, but...
The saying "All your base are belong to us." comes to mind when i think about the grammer of this clip.
Reviews for "quest for true love part1"
ClockRadio responds:
i am sorry i do not kno the saying. is it from a nother langage?
Well done.
You have great potential Edgard. This has a potential to be an excellent story. But I would recommend redoing it in your own language or redoing it when your english is better. You will go far.
ClockRadio responds:
i am from iceland an i speak englush a lot. i will try to learn from books more. thank!
Very cute.
The story, while being very generic, was certainly creative and cute. The grammar was horrid, the art was pixely and odd, and the whole thing seemed to lack some effort.. but it was still very well done, considering your age. All in all, this submission differed very much from others, which is both fantastic and terrible. I can't say the art and grammar was amazing, but I definitely look forward to what you may achieve in the future. If the story didn't have so much substance and length, I would give this a three or so. However, seeing as the circumstances are otherwise.. you deserve a five or a six. Good luck in the future.
ClockRadio responds:
thank. ther r hard word from ur review but i will use a guiding book for meaningg. i will try to be more creative && generic! thank
Not bad
Not bad for a 10 year old.
In the story you wrote wapple instaid of apple.
ClockRadio responds:
lol! that his name. thank you for review