You did a nice job here.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
The animation was pretty cool. I personally like the wobble effect of the lines in flashes when it's properly done and I think that you did it great here. That being said, I might be disagreeing with Coop below me, but I do feel the thin lines were great and I wouldn't want to see this solid. Sucks when you get reviews that contradict and tell you to do opposite things doesn't it? :P
~ Story/Content ~
Sometimes it's nice to see a story with these, but it's really not necessary. The thing that bothered me was the lack of content. It started off great with a lot of things going on, but then it just ended way to soon. I would have loved to see this video go for somewhere around two minutes. I'd suggest adding much more content to this for it to get a better score.
~ Audio ~
The animation was synced well with the song. I guess now that I think, it was the song that limited how long the flash was. Perhaps picking a longer song would be very beneficial or maybe using several different songs added end to end.
~ Overall ~
Very good for the small amount of content that you have. I would suggest trying to find a longer song and animating to that so you can have more going on with the submission.
~ Additional Comments ~
What the hell was up with the right click/play at the very end of the submission? :P
~ Review Request Club ~