Very nice
I love the animation style and the flow of the story and all that, but you really need to add a preloader and a "replay?" button at the end.
Very nice
I love the animation style and the flow of the story and all that, but you really need to add a preloader and a "replay?" button at the end.
hmmm
seems unfinished
Not bad
Not bad for a first. The art in particular was quite good. The biggest con was naturally the length, since there wasn't enough time for much to happen.
You should also consider adding a play/replay button, as opposed to the repeating loop format.
I enjoyed it immensely
Not a commonly used style which is nice to see, and you even managed to keep it relatively smooth despite the medium.
The music fit well with the topic, the other sound effects were perfect.
Plot was a little shallow, but you couldn't have done much more in that time.
The overall effect was superb.
Points to improve on for later submissions would be more length to the movie, and a preloader. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Good animation, freezes though
The animation quality is really good, but it keeps freezing. A loading bar at the beginning to make sure it fully loaded before starting would probably have helped.