I hate you! Why won't you die!
Just kidding, but like all the others had said: It was just way to fast. Also you can get sounds from Newgrounds itself, so you can pick all the explosions for your grenades; gunshots for your weapons; and dropping from well whatever! You did your best to make the characters detailed, but the animation of it dropping through the ground, would well explain it. So would the explosion animation from that grenade. For a first timer you did ok. *Gives a 5*
meh
its ok.
Good Try!
Wow, Like other's said.. Super fast, no sound and the middle needed to be cleaned up a bit..
Slow down, take your time, and draw out the fights.. If your loader screen is any cred about how you can draw and work flash, your gonna do good.. Just make the thing last three minutes.. That's your goal..
Its a good start.
Your flash went by a little too fast. You should try to make the objects move smotthly instead of appearing here then appearing there. More effort needs to be put into animation, though you did an ok job with the art. Keep going.
~Depes Crystalline~
Keep it up
Not bad for your first mate, It felt very rushed, each little scene flew by. Also the complete lack of audio didnt help. Take your time with the next one and put some effort into music/sound effects, Gunshots etc.