Great video
This vid was great and the only way you couldn't like it if you were a two bit stuck up a-hole with life issues and needed to take them out on some ones hard work and I'm not naming any names *cough*Redfeather*cough* but they need to find something else to go after!!!
the end was pretty funny
the voice acting was good but idk the delivery of the " no disney land for you" was alittle flat. over all the art work was great
Felt I should try one last time
Apparently my last review was considered "offensive" and therefor was taken down for violation. I guess I just cleaned out the needless profanity racial slurs and made it something that wasn't as much attacking the author, but the flash itself. Just for the record; trolling is trying to get a hate filled response through posting false information or leaving unprovoked intentionally hate filled or insulting comments for the purpose of getting someone upset, so you can see why being labeled as such when I'm just trying to express my personal opinion, would be found as offensive. I would be trolling if I were to say this was anything short of awful.
I don't even feel like reviewing this garbage, there's just so many thing to point out, and you've probably already heard about how bad and gay the characters/voices/story are a million time. And after reading you pour your heart out about how the lifeless trolls ruined the NG experience for you, I could not dare to leave you another hate filled review, in fear of hurting your very fragile feelings. You deserve more then just an award for this my dear girl. Also I'm going to review it anyways.
This just felt so real, I felt like was actually in a literally gay catgirl wetdream, personally, I was hard the whole ride. Don't bother getting new voice actors, because, quality put aside, if you, the one who wrote this. made the lines sound bad, emotion wise, then even the highly recommended bloated queen of newgrounds Rina-Chan (deceased), could never possibly hope to make this abomination watchable, might even be able to make it worse though. In the terms of animation it was ok, even if it was a gay as hell anime style tweenfest that made me physically sick.
The Herbert the Pervert cameo was just gay as fuck, I understand how you had to Incorporated some western cartoon character, but fuck didn't just put the cherry on the top of this piece of shit. I mean really, did you go through a book of gay cliche jokes from 2006 to come up with that? Also, Amtrax is a huge faggot assclown, you would be better off taking a voice clip right out of the show.
"I will take a little break from Newgrounds, and see you on DeviantART, where we are a community and support each other, not bring people down." really? are you that tuned out and down right stupid that you believe that the two site are even comparable? Go back to getting jerked off by other weeaboo cockslaps on your gay needless 14 year old needless asspat site.
Now for the constructive criticism part! Although this may not be 'as bad' as I'm making it out to be, this honestly had very little effort put into it it, and it shows through all the the tweens you used in the animation the jokes were poorly timed jokes, and the over all poorly constructed story based around going to Disney land and pedophilia. Am by no means calling you a bad artist, because in comparison to your other art piece, this in no way reflects your artistic capability.
Taking criticisms is something you should really try to work on, most of your responses just say "would like to see you do better", "I didn't make it for you", or "if you don't like it, don't watch it/leave a review". All this shows is that that you, if a comment offends to the point where you can obviously tell their just trying to be mean, don't reply, it just feeds into a cyclical of hate and ignorance because you can't understand how anyone could be so heartless. You're above stupid insults.
Although you may just see me writing this review as a waste of everyone's time including my own, I am entitled to my opinion and will even take the necessary precautions in order to make my review fit guidelines. I could care less about what some fanbase wrapped around the idea of some catgirl incest fantasy thinks of me, because although that is your target demographic, it is a shamefully embarrassing one and that, and when that is what you try to hind behind, it just looks pathetic. Better luck next time. Also, I scouted you on the art portal for some reason.
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Extremely Cute, mildly funny
I thought that this was pretty well-done. It had terrific voice-acting ( if you did the voice-acting for Jessi then you have a very cute/hot voice XD ) and a very cute sense of humor. It was also, very well-drawn. A little edgy at prts, but still nicely drawn none-the-less. :) Also, I thought that Jessi was adorable at prts! XD Almost all of her little expressions made me go " Aww... how cute " and I'm a guy so I don't usually think things are cute or go " Aww " lol XD so, kudos for making me think that way.
I look forward to future flashes on NG by you. :D
--DarkDremora