Reviews for Edwin Ep03

[Tyler]

that was pretty good!

I enjoyed this short a great deal, and it has a lot going for it.

The voice acting is top notch, and the sound effects are well used too. I like the little things you did too, the camera composition and panning worked well. You did a good job with making your story interesting and kept my attention! Additionally, the designs of the characters and simplicity of everything was very well done.

My only gripe is that I really think the background textures are overdone. In my opinion, in some of the scenes it isn't necessary to have the textures on there so heavily; in a few scenes the strong textures hurt to look at. I think they sometimes distract the attention away from the animation/content.

But all in all, good job! I'm looking forward to more!

Kieran-s responds:

Thanks, I overdid the textures at the first scene because it was a dream sequence. That and the art was pretty bad so I played with knocking it up a notch to make it look better. But yeah, your right.

[Drac07]

Enjoyable

Fun to watch! I know what you were going for with the fast voices in the recap, and it was pretty funny but not very easy to understand. The idea of vampires and the hunters who hunt them has been done to death... but still, you have a pretty good story going. Good luck!

[Crazyass37]

hmm...

I actually liked it for my first vampire movie (except 30 days of night) it was both funny and had a story to it. great job!

[Redundently]

Missing Something

There's something missing with the characters. Maybe more emotion or expression I am not sure. One thing for sure is that some area's in the animation(drawing) are more detailed than other areas.

[drdresapinkbunny]

Awesome!