This was ok. You have a lot of potential, and it seems like you just need some more experience. I actually thought the girls voice in this was pretty tight. It reminded me of a song from long ago that made me appreciate this more. Good luck with future work bro!
Reviews for "Ninja Girl"
ChandlerThompson responds:
Thanks dude, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Its interesting. The girls voice is kinda annoying and it kinda sounds out of place. Its also doesn't sound like every thing sits right. It just dosnt flow well. Keep trying though you'll get the hang of it through practice
ChandlerThompson responds:
I see where you're coming from. I appreciate the review, dude!
The song was pretty poorly composed. The majority of the time is was just a mono synth with a highly repetitive beat behind it. You need to add more variety to the music, its very dull at the moment.
The samples you used, the girls singing and the high pitched "hiiiya" were pretty bad, especially that high pitched one. Poor choice of samples I think or at least poorly implemented.
The lyrics are well written but again poorly executed, the vocals just did not sit well at all. The vocals go out of key quite a bit which makes it a bit painful to listen to. Its very mid frequency heavy with little to no bass. I know you have a low voice underneath but it just sounds very very dull.
I think overall you need to expand on the composition, add more instruments and liven it up. Work on tuning the vocals more and making them more exciting. My biggest issue is that synth, is so weak and takes away from the song quite a bit.
Keep at it anyway, practice makes perfect.
2.5/5
ChandlerThompson responds:
I really appreciate the review buddy! I'm glad you mentioned the samples and what not because I am kinda new at this and had no idea how they sounded to others since i'm so conditioned to the song by this point. Thanks again for the awesome review.
NINJA!
ChandlerThompson responds:
HIIIIII-YAAA!