Seemed decent
I usually like musical things like this, loved the darkness factor to it, the fucking sniper part/helicopter part scared the shit out of me cause i had my volume up to hear what they guy was saying, thats the only reason I didnt score higher, I really couldnt understand what all he was saying
Have to agree Death crunch
Mix the sound better and you have something...i had to strain to hear what was bieng said.
It was good BUT
The dance break on the roof was almost exactly like something a friend of mine did for the exact same song on youtube! Exact same music and timing. I'm not sure if that's because the song provided for the contest (if this were some sort of contest) all had that music break or not. Either way, it looked extremely similar.
Your cartoon was good though!
Here's his video here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v= XvOJHyDypf8
Of course, it's going to be similar seeing as how they're both using the exact same subject material. Good luck on the job!!
Good work, audio needs improvement.
Good work soldier, liked the animation very much, however your audio was way too quiet. The dancing part could've been left out too.
It was ok
you really must do some thing about your audio. The music was not at the same level as your recorded voice. If you have any audio editing software I would fix the gain and normalize the voice with the music audio so you don't have bouncing levels. Also I agree that you need a better recording device, you are loosing too much quality. The animation was in need of a little bit of work. Your character was loosing design through out the animation. (different body types and the face changed slightly as well.) the story and music written was really cool though. I hope this was helpful