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Reviews for "I'm Not Your Broom"

Funny and lip-syncish.

Well made, but it misses 2 things:
1: Colors
2: I sound effect when the bus hits Broom or whatever his name is.
I give it a 7/10 here in the review and a 3/5 at the voting and blam stuff.

Carbonwater responds:

No colours on purpose, obviously.

Short and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad with this one, the "PLAY" screen had that nifty tank, but the back end of this area was all blank, might have been nice to see something back there atleast something not so bland as the white backround, i normally find some deep greens and reds to be pretty neat, just an idea though, its not anything major but it could help, now as i view the flash its pretty neat filled with some very creative and nifty characters, i do like the black and white style, but the backrounds seem to bland even for black and white theme as you have here, now maybe if you had the back end black and white, and the characters "OUTLINED" in some sorta color, your flash seemed way too short, so maybe you could make it longer or maybe add other little short animation s with it, you know to give it that extra bit for the viewers to really enjoy what you have here, i guess i can understand the shortness for it for the end result but still something to think about, and last but not least ad some "SUBTITLES" it would be a nice little extra for the viewers, well hope i didnt bore you with my review infact hope it helped abit, anyways good luck on your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
above i mentioned a number of suggestions such as , subtitles, color in the backend, longer ending, and a menu screen blandness

~~OVERALL~~
funny and short but still could be even better

~X~

funny

weird i dont know what you were smoking but that was still funny and original:D