Not bad at all
That was pretty good. The broccoli was funny, just I think that you could give a tad more emotion to the corn. The archtypal reservist/no fun guy is just a bit old. Good voices and animation too.
Reviews for "Corn and Broccoli (Ep 1)"
speedmetal0789 responds:
I couldn't agree more. The idea with Corn is (obviously for him to clash with Broccoli he must be the polar opposite but..) eventually if this were to become a series, he provides the sobering/realistic points of view, while occasionally showing glimpses of compassion. Overdone character? Probably. Overdone character represented as an ear of Corn? Don't think so. :)
Perfect
Oh man this was great. Perfect story telling, especially how you were able to force corn to stay. Genius.
Why are cuss words so funny? It's nice that you bleep them out I guess, but I can't show my kids because I'm one of those protective parents. Too bad.
Hilarious
animation great for this sort of thing. really did feel like a pilot ha-ha which made it even better. good jokes and easy plots. love it. keep it up looking forward to more.
Alright start
This is going to be a quick and dirty review:
-Very overdone Oddcouple style plot, but then again most sitcoms are based off of other sitcoms. (Still, a very overdone concept so be careful not to be too cliche.)
-Decent art style, no complaints
-Decent voice acting/sound
-Focus more on the minutia of the plot, make the premise believable. Who moves into an apartment based on a Craigslist ad without meeting the guy who signed the lease (well, apparently Broccoli... but still)? And why would the signer of the lease even think about walking out on his contract? I know it's just a short flash, but you've made it obvious that you either A) have never rented an apartment or B) don't pay attention to detail in your writing.
-Work on the plot line too. You started the episode by introducing the conflict. You then added conflict by finding the probably illegal money. But, you never resolved any conflict. Plot is often a simple matter of conflict and resolution, but you missed the second half. I'm not saying that you can't have cliff hangers, but if you're going to do that make sure that it's really suspenseful (ie. wait for Corn to find out the money is a dangerous drug-dealer's before going to credits).
Entertaning
This movie is pretty good. I found it humorous and the awesome style of animation worked very well. This series looks promising.
Well done!