Better than I expected.
I really liked this, It wasn't over the top, it wasn't unnecessarily horror-like. It was one of those stories you would hear when your very young. It was pleasant to watch. You've got some talent, and I loved the narrative style.
Original and provocative
Very well written! Reminds me of Roald Dahl. Love the animation. You have an alluring voice. That unforgettable sense of child hood innocence, lingers through out the whole story. Just brilliant. Simply brilliant.
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Great story, I loved the stiff animation of the girl, it fit very well with the feel of the story. Narration was incredible, though I had to put my volume pretty high to hear it the voice still came through very clear.
I recognized your style instantly within the first minute or so (I don't look at the artist information until after the video). I'm glad to see you back on Newgrounds after so long, your works have always been a favorite of mine. I would love to see more of your stories, maybe even bringing back the girl from "Genevieve" and your other animations. Anyway, welcome back and great job on your returning piece.
Brilliant
What a change of pace from the average Newgrounds submission.
great story
fantastic narracion but i think that with these flying body parts and blood it should be rated T