Oh my
The last sentence really saved it!
It was so-so until then 'cause of missing music and 08/15 voiceacting.
But I really laughed at the last one.
If you want my 2 cents, add a bit of low music, train the voice-acting a bit more, and work a bit on the timing of the jokes.
But since you got me with the fade-out, 10/10.