Need to be better
This was an enterteining movie, along with a good representation from it. But the animation, we can see that you was a little lazy to do it, this is most notable when the couple of cats are running up the stairs and I think you could do when they come to the storybook place, the door will be much better animated than that "photo" kind. Now for topics:
{NAME}
The name of it, was like weird, "World's End Umbrella", I didn't catch it exactly, is like when they come to the storybook, they came to the end of the umbrella, like in his top, or this is like they was sent to other "dimension" or thing because they where not seen anymore or you forgot the "World's end ON umbrella" and did not fit.
{CONCEPT}
The umbrella is a tree where is like a building having ladders on it and a secret world all inside it, this is really a magic one, all out of physics on it, but this fit with the music, because, was to come in a place where was everything out of reality just seen on story books, or in fables and such things, so this was one positive point of this movie.
{ANIMATION}
You did this lazy, right? Is just some brush painting and moving their legs in simple onion skin frames, the cumulus of it was they running up the ladders, was really poor, also as I said for the door closing. You should pratice more your animating skills.
{ART}
The art is acceptable, you did good on it, the tree was well designed. But sometimes as the animation, the graphics were just brush painting, nothing in special. One thing I liked is that black things that is like a close of the camera on the film, the place where you did the lyrics of the song, this was nicely done. Nice job!
{OVERALL}
Need a better looking for animating and you should do more well prepared symbols and movie clips for it, don't know, brush painting is really simple and I do not like this. The art could be better, but I give you a positive point for this. The story and concept for it was ok. For your next project, you should do a better drawing.
I give you 7 score and a vote 3.
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