LOL Its Awsome
Man I loved it. I found it funny and that's all that counts! Jesus the critic below me is like expecting nothing less then an Oscar nominated perfection. Don't be a snob. In my book I just sit back and enjoy what I see. There can be only 2 categories ether I like it give it a 5 in voting power and 10 review where I write down how much I like it or I don't and I give it a zero and keep quite in the review section. This CARTOON IS GREAT:) !!!
Has potential, but needs wayyyy more effort.
You have a fun to look at, cartoony style. And for a second animation, it definitely isn't bad. But you really need to put way more thought into your art, animation, ideas and jokes.
Practice animating speech instead of just stretching your characters a little when they talk. Make movements more fluid by using more frames to animate them.
But, of course, the biggest issue is that it's just another in the endless stream of videogame parodies. With overused and tired jokes. Don't try and rush your storywriting and animation so it'll be ready for submission faster. A good flash movie takes loads of time and planning to make.
Overall though, I do think there's some talent in there if you try hard to improve.
a little rough around the edges.....
but otherwise a hilarious Mario parody. add in more deaths next time and you'll be golden.
Very nice
You definatly have potential for comedy.
RLLY GOOD
i loved it 5 and 9 where my favorites i always die that way in mario games ( lava and stuff) anyway good job should make a longer movie though.