OMFG
This is freakin awesome. "I'm not done with you ye- SURPRISE!!!" I tried not to laugh. I tried so hard. Keep it up man.
Reviews for "WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1"
lol ^.^
oh cats I can't stop laughing that was great.
ok to the review humm I liked alote of it but there was some bad points.
one: some of the flash was a little off danirblade went into it so I wonts.
two: what was with the gray people walking by the school someone got lazy ^.^
good points. the story was really good it was funny cleaver and you when out there with your jokes.
i'm looking foreword to seeing more. ^.^
audio plox
e.g.
when J.T. talks it's in X strength. When BBD talks is X-10 strength. I don't like turning the volume up and down a long the entire flash, please try to match the volume strength for all the characters for your next flash :D
A good start...
I'm sure along what hopefully will be a long series the animation will improve, but compared to most first eps this was pretty good already, like to see less repeated background and cut scenes thought.
Can I sense a bit of a gay undertone in one of the characters? That would be interesting to see how that pans out, would make a nice break from the other teen group series... bonus already as you avoided the stereotype. But i may be seeing something that isn't there... guess i'll have to wait.
Music was a bit too quiet at times, but of course we prefer that than too loud... but it also seemed a little haphazard in its use.
Apart from those minor issues, good humour and nice easy introduction of characters, even though i can't imagen a teacher ever address students like that haha!
some distracting editing slack
Well drawn, animated, and scripted but 6/10 because it is still unfinished work. Work on your video&audio cuts, voices, and especially your choice&cut of soundtrack more thoroughly and this could be funnier, that's just as important as the content itself.