Hmmm ...
Nice animation, decent comedic tone (the irony of all things), graphics are good. A bit short, but I think there's a little message to it.
At any rate it's pretty good. Nice job.
Reviews for "The Worm and the Apple"
TheElSalvador responds:
Aye, I wanted to make it longer but it's due tomorrow and I wasn't sure how long it would take to add some of the other stuff I had in mind. All in all I'm happy with it as a completed assignment.
Nice
that was pretty good but next time use more charcters, udeas, areas and make your own background and items, but i injoyed watching it
TheElSalvador responds:
I did make the backgrounds and items. I went out and took many pictures with my digital camera. I also went to the store and bought some apples and took pictures of those. I then chose the most fitting pictures and photoshopped them a bit. Like I said, everything contained in this flash I personally created... except for the crow caw. I got that from a public domain sfx site.
I definitely plan on expanding in the future, this was just the first animation project of my college career.
Nice.
The moral of the story? At least heed SOME of the advice of your elders. Nicel ittle flash there mate. :)
TheElSalvador responds:
Thankya thankya
A Moral With Comical Value Included
The artwork for the most part is great, the worms, bird, and apple were all nice. The animation was nice at some points, but when the worms were talking the lip-sync was kind of off. The voice acting was actually pretty good. The sound effects were superb and your background music choice was superb as well. The storyline is pretty basic, it makes sense and it actually gave me a chuckle. Overall I'd give you an A... but on Newgrounds I'd give you a B.
|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Music
*Great Voice
*Superb Story
|| Bad Points ||
(none)
Yeah...
The animation was pretty sloppy (Please don't relate this to my spam), yet pleasant. The voice clips had good quality, but I had to turn my volume up to hear what they were saying. It ended too abruptly but did put a smile on my face.
-DriftLV1
TheElSalvador responds:
You're crazy... the voice quality was the worst thing about this. Much too tinny.