wow
even though it is really short, this a really great improvement if its only your second one, nice
wow
even though it is really short, this a really great improvement if its only your second one, nice
O.K.
This has a little potential. The character needs some conflict or some story. I saw some similarities to the Pencilmation series. If you continue this at least give the character a name. 3/5 7/10