Well, it was close
I've gotta agree with "bludawg"... the voice acting ruined it for me. I think a common problem with flash animators, or authors, or film directors, or any young artist is that they think they have the talent to handle all aspects of a given piece of work by themselves. Obviously you do have talent, but your talent isn't with voice acting (in my opinion). There's no reason to get too crazy about this, just find someone who as a more interesting voice and you'll be good to go. No one's perfect, we can't have it all. Good effort.