What was the fanfic about exactly? The song changes alot in tone that sometimes its a bit hard to understand. But thats what i love about it to, its like showing an adventure of someones life. Also i practically can't really hear your errors so this one is getting another perfect 5 from me.
NAOW MAKE SOMETHING WITH TEH ALICORN TWALOT jk. Make whatever you want :D
Someone already made a Princess Twilight Sparkle Suite by constructing it from the various songs in the season finale. It is far superior to anything I could make: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ulCF77j_kS0
The improv was only loosely based on the fanfic so some of the ideas are sad while some are unrelated. It was a realistic take on Rainbow Dash being gay in a society stuck in the 1950s - which meant most of her friends wanted to "cure" her, not actually accept her.
nice