It's a start...
I can tell that a lot of work and effort went in to this and that you truly wanted to make something special. The only problem real problem is the art. These type of game are based on artistic value. And don't give me that sob story... I'm only a kid... Please be gentle. If your not that good your not that good. It has nothing to do with age, it has to do with skill alone. what version of flash do you have. If you CS3 or higher learn how to use the sub selection tool. There is a reason if has it's own button.