Holy shit
I... I...
I'm not sure what to say. This was perfectly animated, a very nice start considering that this is your first thing...
But damn, that was actually too creepy for me to comprihend. I... That was just... too much. Without any warning at first. You should definently have written something about that it's not suitable for those with a weak heart or pshycological problems, or don't like blood and... guck.
Otherwise... a bit short, and I don't really get the meaning behind the flash... but besides that a very good first submission.
Just... cut down a little on the... guck? Please?