0's across the page=no thinking clones
i won't be a clone or copy and do what everyone else is doing honestly it wasen't that funny and i have a large range of humor,it looked decent so here is a more realistic score bud
Reviews for "Kratos Tragedy"
It was okay
Up until you put in the poop joke.
Don't get me wrong I love crude humour, but I felt that the timing was just not there.
Meh, the animation was aight though. Feel free to reply to this saying I don't have a sense of humour.
TheQookieMonster responds:
Good review. I won't hate. I think your right I didn't get the timing for it but it's alright!
ehhmmm....
What's your point????
XD jajajja, es envidia, de perdis kisiera saber animar :3 jojo
PDT: Por eso me borran mis revies vdd 'Monstro'? XD jajaja
lol
I actually thought that was funny but why the seriousness in the first part of the flash? anyways could have been drawn better but obviously this isn't meant to be taken seriously so it was kinda funny at the end.
Not a particularly great animation
This animation was sort of a let down. There was tons of build up, and I was expecting a fairly hilarious conclusion. Instead, it was simple toilet humor, and I was left disappointed.
Your artwork is good, and the animation flowed well enough. However, what really is lacking is the humor. I was expecting some subversion of a gameplay element or something along those lines. Instead, you simply used toilet humor to elicit a laugh. However, I don't honestly believe that many people would find it all that humorous.
So, in terms of art, I score highly. However, it is the writing that falls short. I think it would be best that you work on writing, as you have a well-developed art style. You just need a good story to back it up.
I hope you don't take my review too harshly. Just keep working at it.