Tekno's opinion
NOW you're talking! The designs are very cool, and realistic, as you intended, and for once I see a great job on shadowing. And as before, your usage of colors and shading are awesome...
Also, I see in this picture your most original work, so my best congratulations on that aspect. I'm even curious to know the settings and plot of these two :) Just please don't name them as Jesse and James or something like that ;)
Keep on working like this!!!
May I suggest you try and draw a scene with these two? C'mon, you surely can do it :)