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Reviews for "Sonic Short"

A C+ for a first time out

The movement was smooth, no bad transitions or speed issues.
The scale of Sonic and the backgrounds was off though and as others have said, a tad too short.

Overall a good first effort, you seem to have the technical side of things taken care of, so the rest should come with practice.

pearljam23 responds:

Interesting, I hadn't thought about the scale issue... a little bigger sonic you think?

Sorry

This actually isn't that good. It's OK for your first flash, but people on this site have more expectations. The storyline was horrendous, I found no humor. At least it has good animation?...

good

it was nice for you first flash

umm

it good but try to make it longer and make sumthing original
n nobody like 2 read the credit, well sum people do

Keep practicing

Personally I don't think it's a good thing to have credits that are longer than your actual video. The good thing is that you do know how to animate sprites to an effective level, but you need to work on story writing and in this case time length. The punch line just wasn't anything to really laugh about and it all happens rather quickly. Just keep practicing and you should nail it, after all I see that this was experimental so just here to offer some advice.

pearljam23 responds:

Thanks, ya now that I have the basic movements it will be much easier to make a new and longer movie! and ya, the credits thing...lol