Has potential for sure quite funny does need sound tho
Reviews for "Cigarettes Kill"
funny and has potential
Out of all the shorts that I watched today, I really find this funny. Reminds me of Stewie and Brian at the Emmy's. I can totally forgive you for using stick figures on this one, though you could at least have given it some more life, color and a little bit of details etc.
-1: cause there's no sound
-1: no details, background etc.
-1: use of silly speech balloons
This will one day be great!
Good concept, great start. I would recommend adding more frames with subtle differences to make it look like it is real-life (you know, that vibrating kind of look). It would distract from the single-frameness of the words if you insist on keeping only one per screen. Maybe lengthening how long a word stays on screen according to it's importance or length? Well, take care and keep it up, Lindsay! And toChoEliteBar below: I think that cuss words actually help lend more comedy to the ridiculousness of such a meeting. Peace!
Lindsayboi responds:
thanks for the specific tips, they'll help a lot me in my next attempt at a flash.
har har.
it wasnt bad... it actually made me laugh... only because I underestemated the video.
so what made me laugh was reading it like a reatard.
Good idea
It was a good idea but it was poorly animated.
But it wasnt rly bad.