disappointing
The animation was pretty decent. Not spectacular but respectable. The voice acting is what really hurt this work. There's little to no emotion and the sound quality is suspect. There are times when the music is louder and ithe voices. If you yourself are not comfortable providing the voices, perhaps you have a friend that can sub in. Also I'm sure if you troll forums long enough it wouldn't be too hard to find someone that might want to collab.
The dialogue itself was really bland. You need some work on your storyboard as I can honestly say my interest in seeing the next installment isn't very high.
If you can correct those two glaring deficiencies, I think you have a good piece going for you.