Weird
The whole flash seems so organic to me (stylistically). Kind of freaky looking. I would have loved to seen more detail in your backgrounds with that style in mind. It just seemed that much of the animation felt so empty.
Anyways just my thoughts.
yeah. :)
it´s ok
well...., I see a very imaginative work right here, trains are very psychodelic and the idea is very innovating, I have to congratulate you for doing the music, but it´s so repetitive.... and the flash is simple, well I see a nice idea that could be better exploited
nice work
And sorry for my english
It's Missing Something...
It's missing the thing that makes these types of animations okay... Artistic value.
There is no artistic value, the art style looks more lazy than creative even if that was what you were going for, and the music is annoying and repetitive.
It gets a five because the animation was good enough and it shows that you have potential to do better. But you could do better. =_=
Uhm...
Okay.
Well...
My low rating is mostly on account of the 'ear-splitting' music. The animation was nice, and the colors were calm. As you mentioned, there was no "ultra-violence", which is a nice change from what I usually see. It looks to me like you are experimenting with things that are new to you and I'd like to see your progress in your next Flash. All in all, pretty good.
AlexanderIII