I pretty much got what I expected.
Despite that I really hated your art style and it immediately made me think of closing the video...this was actually pretty amusing. The jokes we're prety funny, you could have pulled that off longer actually.
Maybe shown us how damn hard the conflicts we're that Shephard had to face before getting back. Now I was getting the feeling that everything was just a bit too rushed. (Well if you we're aiming this for Valentine's...)
Good emphasizing though! That's what parody is all about. I've heard that ME2 is really picky on the sex side, even more than it was on the first one! Even though in the first one things we're really lame too.
I know that this was supposed to be a quick V-day, mass effect 2 crossover parody thingie, but the voice acting was still low-grade. Well whatever, it served it's purpose. We are amused.
But what about Tali then..?