I WONDER IF SHE DIES?!
Reviews for "Young Lovers"
His eye-lashes, dear god his eye lashes!
No offense but the mid-life crisis joke just saved this whole animation, the rest was all kinda bland.
dogsinthecathouse responds:
Hehe, whoa, this a blast to the past! I made this animation nearly four years ago!
You're probably right, I'm pretty sure I recall this one being pretty slowly paced until the end. To be honest though, I haven't even seen this cartoon in years, and I don't really feel like looking back at it right now since, as you noted, I recall most of it not being particularly interesting. Thanks for the review though! I always appreciate it! :)
improvement needed
it was ok at best. I didnt find it too funny, the art was lacking some, and the animation you did have in it was below average. the voices were a little on the downside as well. you do have potential, so work on your style and animation. I can see you becoming a great animator in the future if you work on improving those things.
dogsinthecathouse responds:
Thanks for the feedback. I rushed it a little, so I should have spent a little more time making the animation look better. And I know the voices sound a little demented. I have a low voice naturally and even though I can change the pitch, it's hard to make my voice sound like a kid's voice. But I'll try to work on ways I can do the voices better.
great ending!
the animation was pretty well done. The beginning wasn't as good as the ending. Really like when they decided to play mid life crisis.
Umm....
That was pretty funny, it reminded me of South Park for some reason.
dogsinthecathouse responds:
It was probably the voices that reminded you of South Park. I happen to be a huge South Park fan, so that probably affects my style.