Well...
The Lightsabers were a lot better, the action was better but:
The Lightsabers were the only decent bit of graphics, the action got a bit repetitive and the quality is a bit low for my liking (but thats me).
If these are for a laugh with your mates then yeah, this will do, although its a bit out of time with the sound, it will do. However, if your planning for a lot of viewing by all the people who are looking at the great stuff on NG, I still think it needs a better camera for that better quality.
Keep it up but remember to make your fights more original - for example, in that film we saw a basket ball ring. Use it, even if it means falling apart to land on someone, at least its original. The garage as well; slice the car to bits or something, get someone to run up a wall to avoid a swing (Thats what I would do but thats me loving anything like that thanks to numerous Jackie Chan movies).
The Possibilities are endless and practise makes perfect so keep trying and you'll get better as you go along.
P.S. Do you think I talked for too long there?
P.P.S Sort those names out. Evil Sith deserve more than what they got (Fos?!), and would a Jedi be called Ian?