Heh
Well, not bad... but I really, really wish you weren't doing it in this style. It kind of reminds me of... well... you should know what it reminds me of, it's been winning weekly awards since the year started. The joke was alright, but you should've done some kind of joke on the one armed guy crying at the end. I mean, he can't cover his face with just one hand, that right eye of his is bound to be more teary than the left due to this. Not bad though. Just... please don't use this style too often. I know it's alluring to take the easy route, but don't use it outside of this series, k? I'd appreciate it anyway. :D