Not bad...
I liked the parts with a rythem going on, but the overall speed of the story was too slow for my taste. You did a nice job on the sound effects tho. Overall, you did well.
Reviews for "life (hebil)"
It was okay
I kept waiting for something to happen, and was mildly surprised when he had a heart attack and got up again.
Much too slow, though, and the sound could have been better. Perhaps some background music?
Otherwise, not bad. Good, consistant, smooth animation.
LOOOOOOOONG
My biggest suggestion is to keep things interesting. Long sequences of the guy walking got boring quick, as did the very long pauses.
I'd suggest either show more diverse angles and such, show different things in the meantime, or just make certain scenes shorter.
If anything, that would be what you overdid; I mean, even the heart beating was a little long. If you had shown the heart once, then shown the guy cooking the snake from a different angle than before, and then showed the heart again, it probably would have kept my attention a lot better =D
However, I AM giving you a 7 because you interested me with the general idea. Just a tip for the future: Use more music (Even if it's quiet, background music is almost ALWAYS a must), improve on your animation (I mean, this goes for just about everyone on newgrounds. You've at least got fbf down, so that's pretty good), and increase the pace!
Quality.
I loved the pace, The sound quality is a bit Wonky. but i think it's fantastic over all.
Good animation quality, thoguh it does wobble around quite a bit, it seems to match the over all style of the film in the end. so im not sure if that was on purpose or not.
The Animation and The Sound, got stoppy at the Night scene where he is eating the snake.
That meaning the optimization wasn't so great.
I myself one day hope to animate in Flash, it's a dream, just like Composing music for my own Series, and stories.
Over all it was strange, deep and entertaining.
Surreal.
Quite Boring...
I loved the story-line, but I found the fim a bit too long. Too much of the same thing (the man walking).
If you had made it shorter, I would have enjoyed it a whole-lot more.