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Reviews for "Needs More Whales"
You know what this film needs.......
MORE WHALES!!!!!!!
Hahaha! Funny but not exellent...
You can improve it by changing title, because if I wouln't know the ending already, it would have suprised me and i would have laughed my face off.
I hope the full one will be popular.
good idea
I really like this idea, you should definitely make another...but string it out, more pointless conversation. Example: maybe 3 characters - two discuss the actual art, then the third's opinion is 'I think it needs more whales' and slow down the delivery. also, think about the audience - show what the characters are looking at first to help the audience understand where the characters are...the less the audience has to the think, the more they will focus on the joke.
Other than that, good stuff man! made me giggle...
WrayProductions responds:
I thank you all for the constructive critiques you have given for my Needs more whales pilot episode. I will take all of your useful feedback and place it in the animated series coming soon. Also when the series is complete check out my website www.wrayonline.freevar.com as i will be including a need more whales mini site.
EASTER EGG NOTICE- If you click the painting of the man in the green shirt on the wall he makes a sound.
hmm
I like the idea of being humourously random, but your storytelling needs more work. Short and/or fast paced cartoons can work well, but this just ended up more as 'wtf was that?' rather than 'lol, wtf was that?!'
Don't let that stop you trying again though, good luck with any future episodes! :)