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Okay, I'm really getting into this now. That was quite interesting indeed. I guess that if anything I have some of the same complaints as last time, but overall I really liked it.
The story really added to the last one and put a lot of confusion that I had together. I do feel that they are short enough that the length of two submissions could probably be put together, but not much longer than that.
The story was pretty creepy and the dark colors used really added a lot to the submission. I felt like you ended this one on a good note as it really makes me question what is going to happen next.
Outside of the bar I took a look at the newspaper and I wondered if that had anything to do with the story. Perhaps it was something that you put there to create a little foreshadowing for people who were paying close enough attention.
I laughed a bit when I read the things on the bathroom stall wall. Seems like something that you would see written. So yeah, overall this really made my feelings about the series as a whole after watching the two in a row. I wish it were to get more attention, but if you keep making them please keep requesting reviews for them because I've enjoyed them so far.
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