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good idea !
The social want people like this man. I like your movie's idea. good luck
thanks :D
Nice, but needs work
The strong point in the flash is definitely the plot. You also did a pretty nice job staging your scenes, as it was pretty clear what was happening in every shot.
The weak points are most definitely the art/animation and the pacing. It's fine to draw in a style using simple shapes, but try and keep things proportional. Also, avoid reusing animation. If the character happens to do the same thing multiple times, try using different angles.
It's nice, but try and spend more time on the next piece. Make every frame a work of art! If you're not completely satisfied with a scene, it's not finished! Looking forward to more from you!
ookk... :)