Decent fight scenes
Well done mate, theres a couple of spelling mistakes in there, the one i noticed the most was when Green boy (lol) was talking to Shadow and said 'saty out of my way.' Im guessin you meant get out of my way? Just major mistype?
But other than that its really good. Not sure what extra sounds you wanted, was v.good with the ones you've got.
thanks, the second one should be better
Not bad..not bad...
And I knew it... You didn't fix the parts I told you before xD But, oh well... It's pretty good..........for an Echidna.. D:
thanks
its pretty good
i like it but the only way i can advance the speech is by right clicking and hitting play over and over cause when you click on the dialog box it does nothing
~ Review Request Club ~
I'll start off saying that I know you didn't request this submission in the review request club, but I am a part of that club and noticed that your submission didn't have a lot of reviews so I spotlighted it for the members to review. Expect a couple more reviews to pop in after this one slowly throughout the week.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
I usually separate animation and graphics into two different groups, but with sprite submissions it's really hard to comment on the graphics that much so I'll just put them together.
The first thing that I noticed that looked like an error was in the forest scene when Knuckles was chasing the hedgehog was that you didn't put the forest background together very well as you could see exactly where you put the two pictures together.
The good thing though was the animation was pretty good all around and that you added a lot of action scenes so there was more complex things added in.
~ Story/Content ~
The story seemed a little generic, but it's so short in the series to really tell where you are going to go with it. I wouldn't mind seeing some things that you wouldn't expect coming in future submissions, perhaps new characters that have never been seen in a Sonic sprite flash before.
So yeah, just don't get too generic with it and I think you are heading in the right direction. Along with that you give no directions in the submission of how to go along and you have to right click to get further or push space. Thing is you might not know that because you don't give any directions on how to do it. I would not only put it in your author comments, but also include it in the submission itself so people don't lower the score because they can't watch the submission.
~ Audio ~
I really felt like you should have had the Sega voice in the beginning when you had the Sega symbol. I feel this because the first whistle was great, it got my attention, but it also made me expect more sounds, which I didn't get. The song that played during the introduction was great all around, but you didn't make it loop. So if someone were to start this, leave the room, and then come back to it they might miss the song all together.
I really didn't like the first song that you used there. I thought it would have been more fitting if you were to use something along the lines of birds chirping, wind blowing, etc..., but the song you used didn't seem to fit. I did enjoy the song there when the screen went dark, but I felt that it needed some sort of sound showing that something made it dark. The song didn't loop well either so I think you need to take away the empty space in between and make it loop better.
I rather enjoyed the sound effects though, but the sound effects were so good that it made me feel that the submission needed voices. If you are interested in voices send me a PM or responds saying so here.
~ Overall ~
You are lacking in a few spots in the audio, but I think they are things that you can fix easily. Be careful when setting up backgrounds because some people will notice like me. Don't get too generic with the story and don't be scared to try voices because I think it might be very fitting, even though it would involve some mouth animation.
I feel strongly about the voices because having to stop and read can take away from the flow of the submission.
~ Review Request Club ~
if u wanted to tell me this crap you could have just PM'd me ya know >.>
and did u read my comments on the animation before you watched it?
Cool
Its funny how a glitched program can inspire something like this. Anyway great flash i'm looking foward for this to be a great series.
Thanks. Hopefully the next episode will be allot better.