bravo .
Great storyline . Do you know something silly , I thought I had to type the password and I thought the password was pay ? Hha . Then my brother was like, oi , you have to press the button ? Hha My greatest moment .
I think you're really good at this, It's funny . Especially how he gets mocked about his voice . I think the other guys voice could be improved just to be a bit clearer and don't get me wrong , your production is great and animation , but I think a bit more practice and your drawings will look great . Im not saying they look bad , but I am saying that you can only get better.
Great work , keep it up