I like it
you could've made made it a little longer but I still like it though. great job
Reviews for "Super Paper Robot"
Overall...
Overall I liked it. Needed a bit more story and time, but I see what you've said that it took you ages. I like it a lot, nice drawing by the way. You're a true artist! 8/10 -2 for Not Much Story & Time. Sorry. Great Job!
Cardboard Confrontation
I liked the art, and I certainly appreciate the time and effort you put into it.
Still, there were some flaws that kept me from being able to really enjoy all of this as a whole.
The animation was suited to the "cardboard" theme and premise.
The music was unique and went nicely with the animation.
The only real thing that didn't seem to help was the rather lackluster story. As far as "havoc" goes there really wasn't much...and the robot leaves shortly after having arrived. The helicopter's really didn't serve much as of a purpose either, except as the one thing that gets destroyed by the unfortunate person being thrown by the robot.
As a short animation, this isn't bad at all. It seems you weren't planning a large scale "robot vs. city" thing here, and that's alright. If you were ever to expand on this I'd recommend drawing some more people, and maybe making the robot attack/be attacked a bit more.
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Good luck with your future animations! =D
M4KBOT responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism, you make some valid points and I will use them to improve my future work.
Nice Job
Well done art and sound with good idea, could have been longer. Good Job over all.
wow
That was quite visionary... and to that, I love it. Great job.... how long did it approximately take you to do?
M4KBOT responds:
Thanks, it's been an ongoing project since September, so quite a long time! :)