Fun animation with "interesting" music
Even though the music wasn't exactly my style, it seemed to fit the story and animation pretty well. It reminded me of the daffy duck cartoon where he fights with his animator. This was really good for a first submission, especially if you did it in just a few days.
Great work
I say that with it being you're first animation being done. I'll add you as a fav just cause I think there's lots more growth and goodness to come. I think the pen looked like a pen had an old fountain pen look to it that's probably why some didn't think it looked like one. I like how it ended too that's what I was worried about enjoyed it to that part hope it didn't end lame. I'd probably give it an 8 but seeing it's your first one and it was smooth fluid and went well to the music I'll go a niner. Keep up the good work mate.
awesome
love the idea of a massive pen being able to colour the world, and the fox not particularly liking that :P. smooth animation, you've got potential, 9/10 :)
Not bad
It's strange, there's nothing great about it, but I kept laughing, which is the great thing I guess.
The only criticism that I have is the black transitions are unnecessary, and kind of break the flow. Even if we just saw the next set for a second without any action, the flow would be a lot better I think.
Other than that, gewd job yew.
The pen looked like a penis
I could have sworn this was something made by Zeurel at first, due to the fact that he made a flash using this song and it had furry people. I thought it was really neat how this still managed to be good in its own right. It's nice you were able to put a story together that fit the song well. I'm not even sure why a fox wouldn't want to be colored in the first place. It's an original idea and I'm glad you have achieved recogntion for it. The backgrounds, if not the most detailed, were also very nice.