Loved it!
Awesome! Can't wait for the sequel!
5/5 10/10
Reviews for "Joe Janitor"
Hey
The guy is talented! Vote 5!
Try making the sequel as you said you will. Pheraps do a point and click game!
freedumbring responds:
Aw man thank you so much!! I'm working on the sequel as we speak and it shouldn't take as long to make since I'm getting a bit better organized with managing the workflow on flash.
Its funny that you'd mention a point and click game, that was my original idea when I came up for this concept! I've always absolutely adored point and click games but I have absolutely no clue how to code. How would I go about learning?
Thank you for watching!
I like it
Looks like you actually spent some time on it, which it seems lately nobody cares to in flash animation. Walking animations and some of the angles need work, like when he opens the closet door, but those are pretty tough so for a first upload this is terrific.
freedumbring responds:
Thank you so much for the input! Im definitely going to take your advice and apply it to the sequel. All the stuff you mentioned is great advice. Thanks for watching and reviewing!
great first upload
The audio was fantastic. That's rare in amateur Flash. The enviroments were well drawn as well. Awesome job.
Like Krimson said... the walking seems a little awkward.. tweens do that. Experiment with some frame by frame..
freedumbring responds:
Aw man thank you so much!
You guys are right, the walk cycles leave a lot to be desired...he looks like hes rollerskating in a couple shots! I've always been a little intimidated of frame by frame animation but now that you mention it, itd probably look a whole lot more organic than the blocky tween walk-cycles I have now. Thank you very much for the advice and thank you for watching!
Not bad, but some suggestions
Perhaps watch people walk to get the motions down, maybe take some classes on perspective.
Other than that, the video is pretty good.
freedumbring responds:
Thank you very much for the review! I'll definitely pay more attention to perspective and more believable looking walk cycles in the sequel. Thanks for watching :-)