A Cool Idea
Good Music with decent sprite work.
However, there were a lot of issues with grammar and spelling...
Overall, a well spent 13 minutes
Reviews for "The Sonicfly Effect"
therealturner responds:
yeea im not to good in english
i do my better ;d txh fr reviewing
Not bad
Who has a party at 3PM though?
therealturner responds:
tails have it lool
Might I make a suggestion?
I found I liked how you told this story- (and I liked the referenced movie's premise, is part of the reason why.)
As others have said the grammar is an issue, perhaps you could ask someone to proof-read your script? Or at least proofread it yourself a few more times first. No rush, it would be good practice. Storytelling has some potential from you, I believe.
therealturner responds:
yea i will consult an expert next time :P
Cool, but....
I like the story, makes me wanna go watch the Butterfly Effect now, but just work on your grammar. That's it man.
therealturner responds:
thx man;D
LOL
I dont think in Mobius they got December, Xmas or Jesus!!! Good efford of animation with ripped sprites
therealturner responds:
lol i saw some official sega pictures Xmas themed xD
maybe they celebrate it just for presents ;)