LOL
I dont think in Mobius they got December, Xmas or Jesus!!! Good efford of animation with ripped sprites
Reviews for "The Sonicfly Effect"
therealturner responds:
lol i saw some official sega pictures Xmas themed xD
maybe they celebrate it just for presents ;)
woopee
Cmon Tails eat that hedgehog, what kinda fox dont eanna eat a plump hedgehog like Sonic.
>^.^< ---OM NOM NOM NOM!!!
therealturner responds:
O.oo!!
Cool, but....
I like the story, makes me wanna go watch the Butterfly Effect now, but just work on your grammar. That's it man.
therealturner responds:
thx man;D
lol the black mage
The black mage is from maple story and he made the arans lose their memory and becom frozen in ice for hundreds of years.The cygnus knights also fight him.But the Black Mage part gave it a ten when it would have been a nine.
therealturner responds:
thank you ;D
Might I make a suggestion?
I found I liked how you told this story- (and I liked the referenced movie's premise, is part of the reason why.)
As others have said the grammar is an issue, perhaps you could ask someone to proof-read your script? Or at least proofread it yourself a few more times first. No rush, it would be good practice. Storytelling has some potential from you, I believe.
therealturner responds:
yea i will consult an expert next time :P