This is probably my favorite of your flashes...
Reading the story, the flash makes allot of sense.
But I kinda want to see this in book form or a flash series.
Cause right now it seems kinda jumbled.
It matches the music from the Rentals very well!
It's not a traditional 'anime' style. Which is what I like about it. No ridiculous BIG EYES or curvature female bodies. It's your own style and it works.
I kinda like this attitude of llu, being a bully but using the money to save for being a conductor. Still,want to see some justification for those kids. OH what a plot that would make!
You know...Hans Van Harkin has a publication studio, maybe you should make a manga.