Overall good
As said it was really good and fuun! :3, but (don't take this to hard might just be me) You talk very fast and I hard to be able to hear what you say. So recomendation is that you have subtitles. But again it's just might be me.
Reviews for "Twisted Christmas Tales 1"
ClockworkPixel responds:
nah i do i talk fast it's haunted me my whole life but thank you very much :)
It good flash but it seems it missing something...
This is a good Christmas flash but I think it missing something. I not sure what but I think there can be done a lot more to make it better. But I did enjoy the sceans with In and out. Ins: Burgers and some dude I know is famous but I forgot him name. Outs: Jesus and salads. I laughed at that part but I know a lot of Jesus fanatics are going to be upset about it. I kinda sighed with the whole "lol cock joke" I not sure how it all started but the cock joke is so 1990s and I think everyone needs to get with the times.
I did like how there planing to take revenge on there being taken advantage of and them killing the humans in the house. I also laughed at the it not rape if you like it on the bottom of the screen. ( that is so true) I think you got some potential but I think you need to work on the animation and jokes. Try not to force humor down are throats but make it come natural. I assuming you going to make a part 2? If you do I can't wait too see it and see how it compares too this one. Hope too see more and keep up the good work. Merry Christmas!
ClockworkPixel responds:
merry christma sto you too thank you for that review i like helpful reviews like this
first of yeah theres going to be more it's going to be a 5 part series every christmas and i'm glad your going to take interest :). secound the charles dawin jesus bit is my views so i'm not saying other views are wrong just saying mine ( which people shouldn't take in offensive but you can never be sure and to finish i never thought of the joke in that way i'll have to work on that thanks again :)
ahah :)
It was funny, and although rough around the edges and a slightly obscure middle section i think it worked well. The audio clips at the beginning which isn't good and the graphics should be kept consistent as they are refined and clean at the start and end but there are times when suddenly the paint brush comes in and things get... messy. But is that because of the graphics tablet dying on you? Otherwise its the best flash i've reviewed today thats under judgement - thus the smiley face.
ClockworkPixel responds:
yeah thats the problem once it died i had to use my laptop mouse pad so you can understand the problem but thank you very much for the review and understanding :D
good
but i can see why you and where you may not be happy with it
humour was good music and audio were good your sharp style of graphics was good however sloppy brushwork and use of "google images" brought it down alot in my books.
keep it up!!
ClockworkPixel responds:
thanks for the review sloppy brush work was due to my graphics tablet breaking and the google images is because i don't know any other images hosting but any way glad you injoyed it and i can work on the bad parts for 2010